Not an especially informative or imaginative piece of reportage. Let me help you just a bit, first read good journalism, the kind that challenges you intellectually and philosophically, second take a refresher course in Geography, as the western wall of the Old Temple Mount in Jerusalem is not known as the "whaling wall", although in a satirical or allegorical context in could very well be, third, expand you vocabulary beyond the worn, bland cliches common to second-rate writing and invest in a thesaurus, if nothing else. There is no more effective way in which to turn off the mind of a reader than the use of cliches and trite phrases, it's simply dull writing--a cure for insomnia. I offer these suggestions assuming of course you intended to excite the readers' taste buds--if so, spice it up a tad.